God Of Gators

I'm usually not into 1st pov but you got me here to read the story. the writing style is smooth and neat. keep it up!

Nah, this is dope. Admittedly, I half expected a dungeon style story with Hunters (before reading) but I found myself genuinely surprised by what the author is doing with the famed System and Apocalypse tropes. The enemies - messengers of gods - called the Agents of Fate (even though it might be a small detail) left an impression on my experience in that first chapter I read. it's not much, these days, it's rare to see enemies that don't allow you to finish your sentence in this genre - enemies that actually attract you to a story. For me, that established the tone immediately, even though I'm sure the Agents won't be the main big bads.But beyond that, I like that even though Leon was weak, he has a lot of fight in him. I don't really like an MC who is too timid even if they aren't privileged with great strength. I also feel he's the perfect MC for this Paradox System, the biggest standout from what I've read from the novel so far (of course).I believe the author poured a lot into the first few chapters where Leon earns the right to use the Paradox system with a match and rematch with the wolf. A resourceful MC works very well when given a system that allows him to reverse time (kinda). For now, he isn't able to make great changes with the system, but I can only imagine what kind of spectacular madness he's going ti be able to perform as he grows stronger!Strong, unique piece author!!!!

I know i’m the one that wrote the book but apparently every opinion is welcome so i’m gonna take the time to tell anyone who may be reading that this is the best book ever created and you should definitely check it out!

(Oh hell no! I ain't gonna look down now!)

A stray thought suddenly struck his mind. And panic filled his mind. He suddenly touched his face around the eye area.

"Sabar oi " Teriak anton lalu berlari membuka pintu gerbang

World building is good but the main character is absolute trash,he is like a preteen hero wannabe that just makes you wanna root against him.Story could have been good but got ruined by MC's personality

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